I have to say, any new character makes me question if they are the mystery stalker.
Manny does seem to have a interesting look to him and I don't know if he's really a good person or also kinda a creeper. He really asks a lot of questions. Maybe because he's a cop.
I think him and Deidre will become close due to the time spent already in her apartment and possible coffee date.
Her mom being in a coma for 12 years is kinda weird twist. How terrible. My father in law who recently passed was in a coma for a week and I'm so happy he passed. Being brain dead and just on life support is a terrible way to live or have family suffer.
The fool. I like how you bring this significance of this card and have Deidre investigate. The interaction between the older lady and man bring a sense of mystic mystery. Some people don't believe in ghost or tarot reading. I certainly do.
The aunt is another possible villain. She seems to be resentful and full of evil.
Great intro for another possible character against Deidre. I love how you describe the prickle in her skin like we all get when we get the chills. I sometimes get this feeling in my own house. I feel my brothers spirit or sometimes a pat on my back and no one is there...
Black mail. Eunice and Freemont are maybe connected. What a crazy combo. What does this mean?
Bess's story is unreal! I can not believe that this Freemont man could do such a thing? It really makes me want to speak out for her. I can't believe this twist. This is a great part to add.
No changes so far. I am enjoying this read.
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